Hello guys! I have been reading other's posts on their cold email sequences and was hoping for some feedback on ours. We typically get anywhere from about a 7 to 15% positive response rate (per 100 emails). We try to keep it simple, as the goal is to schedule an introductory demo to our product. Do let me know what you guys would improve? I can also include our follow up email later if that is helpful?
I hope you are well.
Our company creates human holograms (in augmented reality) for live or prerecorded content and messaging. We are already filming holograms for fashion brands, sports clubs, and media companies like X, Y, and Z. Here’s an example: ___
Would you be open to discussing our capabilities?