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Episode 20: Wordy… because of too much Personalization

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Kristina and Will look at common email mistakes (using real examples) and rewrite them so that you can learn what to do differently.

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Watch today’s re-write, and check out the before and after emails below.

BEFORE:

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REWRITE 1:

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REWRITE 2:

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